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Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Appeal to emotion

Using emotionally positive wording to create a favorable impression rather than just stating neutral facts.

Examples include: - “书香润童心” (book fragrance nourishes children’s hearts) in the title, which is metaphorical and emotionally uplifting rather than descriptive. - “为孩子们的课外阅读提供更多选择”“让孩子们的阅读选择更加多元” – these are reasonable inferences but framed in a clearly positive, feel‑good way. - “刚刚孩子们看到新书都很开心，看得出来他们是真的喜欢。” – this quote emphasizes children’s happiness, which is factual as a quote but is selected to reinforce a warm emotional tone.

3 suggestions

Replace the metaphorical title with a more neutral one, e.g. “山东聊城市冠县店子镇中心小学获捐500册图书 设立‘爱心图书角’”。

Rephrase evaluative sentences into neutral descriptions, e.g. change “为孩子们的课外阅读提供更多选择” to “用于补充学校课外阅读资源”。

When quoting emotional reactions, add brief context or data if available (e.g. how many students use the reading corner, how often), to balance emotion with information.

Oversimplification

Presenting a complex issue (rural education and rural revitalization) as if it were adequately addressed by a single, simple action.

The article links the donation and the livestream campaign directly to “助力乡村全面振兴” and “用镜头记录下山东省乡村振兴的生动实践，并以实际行动支持乡村教育”。 While these actions are positive, the wording can imply that such publicity activities and a 500‑book donation are substantial or sufficient contributions to “全面振兴”, which is a broad, complex policy goal.

3 suggestions

Qualify the contribution more precisely, e.g. “以实际行动在一定程度上支持乡村教育” or “为乡村教育提供力所能及的支持”，避免暗示单一活动对“全面振兴”有决定性作用。

Add one sentence acknowledging that乡村振兴和乡村教育提升涉及多方面长期工作, and that this activity is one small part of broader efforts.

Avoid broad, sweeping formulations like “助力乡村全面振兴” unless accompanied by concrete indicators or explanation of the scale and limits of the contribution.

Biased language / Promotional framing

Using positive, promotional wording that implicitly praises the organizers and the campaign.

Phrases such as: - “用镜头记录下山东省乡村振兴的生动实践” – “生动实践” is a positive evaluative phrase. - “并以实际行动支持乡村教育，助力乡村全面振兴。” – this reads partly like a campaign slogan, highlighting the virtue of the organizers. The article lists all organizing and supporting institutions in a way that resembles a press release, which is typical but still somewhat promotional.

3 suggestions

Rephrase to more neutral wording, e.g. “对山东省部分乡村振兴项目进行了报道” instead of “记录下…生动实践”。

Change “并以实际行动支持乡村教育，助力乡村全面振兴” to a more descriptive sentence such as “活动同时开展了图书捐赠等公益项目，用于补充部分乡村学校的教育资源”。

Clarify that this is one of多项宣传和公益活动, avoiding language that sounds like a slogan or value judgment about the organizers.