庆祝中国共产党成立105周年大会将于7月1日隆重举行 _新闻频道_厦门网. 

Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Biased language

Use of value-laden or honorific wording that implicitly conveys a positive evaluation rather than neutral description.

Phrases such as “隆重举行” (grand/solemnly held) and the overall honorific framing of the event and titles are mildly evaluative. For example: “庆祝中国共产党成立105周年大会将于7月1日上午10时在人民大会堂隆重举行。” The wording presupposes the event’s importance and positive nature rather than simply describing it.

3 suggestions

Replace “隆重举行” with a neutral verb such as “举行” or “召开” to reduce evaluative tone: “将于7月1日上午10时在人民大会堂举行。”

Where possible, separate factual description from implied value judgment. For example, instead of “庆祝中国共产党成立105周年大会…隆重举行”, use “将举行中国共产党成立105周年纪念大会” to keep the tone descriptive.

Maintain official titles as needed for accuracy, but avoid adding extra honorific adjectives beyond what is necessary to identify roles and functions.

Omission of key information / Unbalanced reporting (structural)

Presenting only the official, celebratory perspective without acknowledging that it is one viewpoint, which can create an impression of unanimity or lack of alternative perspectives.

The article only states that a celebration and award ceremony will be held and that it will be broadcast by major state media. It does not indicate that this is an official state/party announcement or that it reflects the government’s perspective. While this is typical for a brief notice, it structurally omits any indication that other views exist or that this is a particular actor’s framing of the event.

3 suggestions

Explicitly attribute the information to its source, e.g., “据中共中央有关部门消息，将于…” or “这是中共中央发布的庆祝活动安排通告”，to clarify that this is an official announcement rather than a universal perspective.

Add a brief clarification of the nature of the event, e.g., “这是一场由中共中央组织的官方纪念活动”，to make clear it is a state/party-organized ceremony.

If the article’s purpose allows, note that the report is limited to event logistics and does not cover broader public reactions or differing views, e.g., “本报道仅介绍大会安排。”