美联储前主席格林斯潘逝世，因警告“非理性繁荣”而闻名_推荐_大众网. 

Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Omission of key information

Leaving out relevant contextual details that would help readers fully understand the significance or controversy around a subject.

The article briefly notes: “但他也因一些决策而受到批评，批评人士认为这些决策为2007-2008年的全球金融危机埋下隐患，例如他倡导放松金融监管。” but does not give any concrete examples of which regulatory changes, what specific criticisms were made, or how strong and widespread those criticisms were. This makes the critical side less detailed than the positive biographical and laudatory content (career timeline, long economic expansion, spouse’s praise, Woodward’s book, etc.).

3 suggestions

Add specific examples of the criticized decisions, e.g. which deregulatory stances or policies (such as positions on derivatives regulation or mortgage lending standards) critics link to the 2007–2008 financial crisis.

Include at least one named critical economist or institution and summarize their argument in one or two sentences, with clear attribution (e.g. “某某经济学家认为…”).

Briefly balance the description of the long expansion with a sentence on debates about whether low interest rates or regulatory choices contributed to later imbalances, again clearly attributed to sources.