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Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Sensationalism

Use of emotionally charged or exaggerated language to make the event sound more exciting than neutrally described.

Phrases such as: - "दमदार प्रस्तुति रहनेछ" (there will be a powerful/impactful performance) - "रमाइला खेलहरू" (fun games) - "सुनिश्चित पुरस्कार जित्ने अवसर" (guaranteed prize-winning opportunities) - "अझ रोमाञ्चक र आकर्षक बनाउनेछ" (will make the carnival even more thrilling and attractive) - "मुख्य आकर्षणका रूपमा रहनेछन्" (will be the main attractions) - "गतिशील प्लाटफर्म" (dynamic platform) These are value-laden, promotional adjectives rather than neutral descriptions.

6 suggestions

Replace "दमदार प्रस्तुति रहनेछ" with a neutral description such as "गायिका रचना दाहाल र ब्यान्ड स्वारको प्रस्तुति रहनेछ" (there will be performances by singer Rachana Dahal and band Swar).

Change "रमाइला खेलहरू" to a neutral phrase like "विभिन्न खेलहरू" (various games) unless specific evidence of participants’ evaluations is provided.

Instead of "सुनिश्चित पुरस्कार जित्ने अवसर पनि पाउनेछन्" clarify the mechanism, e.g. "केही खेलहरूमा सहभागीले पुरस्कार जित्ने व्यवस्था गरिएको छ" (arrangements have been made for participants to win prizes in some games).

Replace "अझ रोमाञ्चक र आकर्षक बनाउनेछ" with a factual description, e.g. "यसले कार्यक्रमका गतिविधिहरूको संख्या र विविधता बढाउनेछ" (this will increase the number and variety of activities at the event).

Change "मुख्य आकर्षणका रूपमा रहनेछन्" to "ब्रान्ड स्टलहरू, प्रवर्द्धनात्मक गतिविधिहरू र विशेष अफरहरू पनि रहनेछन्" (there will also be brand stalls, promotional activities and special offers).

Replace "गतिशील प्लाटफर्म प्रदान गर्ने लक्ष्य राखेको छ" with a more neutral formulation like "विद्यार्थी तथा युवाहरूलाई संगीत र विभिन्न गतिविधि एउटै स्थानमा उपलब्ध गराउने लक्ष्य राखेको छ" (aims to provide music and various activities in one place for students and youth).

Appeal to emotion

Using positive emotional framing (excitement, thrill, attraction) to promote the event rather than just presenting neutral information.

The article repeatedly emphasizes excitement and enjoyment: - "युवा लक्षित यस विशेष कार्यक्रम" (this special youth-targeted program) - "अझ रोमाञ्चक र आकर्षक बनाउनेछ" (will make the carnival even more thrilling and attractive) - "संगीत, उत्साह र अवसरहरू एकै ठाउँमा अनुभव" (experience music, excitement and opportunities in one place). These phrases are designed to create a positive emotional response and encourage attendance.

3 suggestions

Replace "विशेष कार्यक्रम" with a neutral term like "कार्यक्रम" unless the criteria for being "special" are specified.

Change "अझ रोमाञ्चक र आकर्षक बनाउनेछ" to a descriptive statement such as "यसले कार्यक्रममा थप गतिविधि र सहभागिताको अवसर थप्नेछ" (this will add more activities and participation opportunities to the event).

Rephrase "संगीत, उत्साह र अवसरहरू एकै ठाउँमा अनुभव" as "संगीत कार्यक्रम, खेलकुद र अन्य गतिविधि एउटै स्थानमा हुनेछन्" (music programs, games and other activities will take place in one location).

Unbalanced reporting

Presenting only one positive, promotional perspective without any neutral or critical context, even though the piece is essentially an announcement.

The article only highlights positive aspects (famous artists, fun games, prizes, special offers, dynamic platform) and sponsors. There is no mention of practical limitations (e.g., entry fees, capacity limits, registration requirements, or any potential downsides). While this is common for event announcements, it still creates a one-sided, promotional tone.

3 suggestions

Include neutral logistical details such as entry fee (if any), registration requirements, time schedule, and capacity limits.

Clarify whether the event is open to the public or only to AITM students, and whether there are any restrictions or conditions.

Avoid only positive adjectives and instead provide concrete information (number of performances, types of games, approximate duration, etc.).

Selective use of sources / Omission of key information

Relying solely on the organizers’ claims without clarifying that the information comes from them, and omitting clarifying details that would help readers understand the event more fully.

Phrases like "आयोजकले जनाएको छ" appear once, but much of the promotional language is presented as fact rather than clearly attributed to organizers. Key information such as ticket price, eligibility, timing, and capacity is missing.

3 suggestions

Explicitly attribute evaluative claims to organizers, e.g. "आयोजकका अनुसार कार्यक्रम युवा लक्षित विशेष कार्यक्रम हो" (according to the organizers, the program is a special youth-focused event).

Add missing factual details where available: entry fee or free entry, event timing, registration process, and whether it is open to the general public.

Where details are not yet fixed, state that clearly, e.g. "प्रवेश शुल्कबारे जानकारी आयोजकले पछि सार्वजनिक गर्नेछन्" (organizers will announce information about entry fees later).