SAINT International’s Naki Depass books Lafayette 148’s Spring 2026 campaign. 

Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Biased language

Use of positive or value-laden wording that implicitly promotes or flatters the subject rather than neutrally describing them.

Examples include: - "SAINT International model Naki Depass continues to make waves internationally..." — "continues to make waves" is a promotional, evaluative phrase rather than a neutral description. - "The beauty from Vere, Clarendon stars in the just-landed advertising campaign..." — "The beauty" and "stars" are flattering, subjective terms. - "I love their clothes as it’s both chic and classy" — this is clearly attributed to Depass, but the article’s overall tone remains uncritically positive and promotional. These phrases frame the subject in a consistently positive light without offering any neutral or balancing context, which is typical of lifestyle/entertainment writing but still constitutes mild bias.

4 suggestions

Replace promotional phrasing with neutral descriptions, for example: change "continues to make waves internationally" to "has worked on multiple international campaigns".

Change "The beauty from Vere, Clarendon stars in the just-landed advertising campaign" to "Model Naki Depass, from Vere, Clarendon, appears in the newly released advertising campaign".

Where subjective opinions are included (e.g., "chic and classy"), keep them clearly in quotation marks and explicitly attributed, and avoid echoing or amplifying them in the reporter’s own voice.

If maintaining a feature tone, add at least one neutral contextual detail (e.g., other notable models or campaigns for the brand) to reduce the sense of one-sided promotion.

Oversimplification

Presenting a subject in a purely positive, uncomplicated way without acknowledging any broader context or nuance.

The article presents Depass’s career and the Lafayette 148 campaign exclusively in positive terms, with no mention of broader industry context (e.g., competitiveness of such bookings, typical challenges in modeling, or how this campaign compares to others). While this is common in short entertainment blurbs, it simplifies the picture to a success story only, which can omit relevant nuance.

3 suggestions

Add one or two sentences of neutral industry context, such as how common it is for models from Jamaica or the Caribbean to book campaigns with American luxury brands, or what this means in terms of career progression.

Briefly note any general challenges or realities of international modeling (without turning the piece negative) to provide a more rounded view.

Clarify that the purpose of the piece is a brief announcement/feature, which helps readers understand why the focus is on positive milestones.