Chef found dead two days after altercation with security at Dublin bar, inquest hears. 

Detected Manipulations & Suggested Changes

Unbalanced reporting

The article provides more detailed accounts and justifications for the actions of the security staff compared to the actions of Mr. Kailedzi.

The article includes detailed statements from security staff and Detective Inspector Katherina Joyce, emphasizing their calm demeanor and minimal physical contact. In contrast, the actions of Mr. Kailedzi and his friend are described with less detail and context.

2 suggestions

Include more detailed accounts from Mr. Kailedzi's perspective or his family's perspective to balance the narrative.

Provide additional context or statements from neutral witnesses to ensure a balanced view of the events.

Biased language

The language used in the article may subtly favor the security staff's perspective.

Phrases like 'tolerant and patient' and 'minimal physical contact' used to describe the security staff's actions may imply a bias towards their perspective.

2 suggestions

Use neutral language to describe the actions of all parties involved.

Avoid using adjectives that may imply judgment or bias unless they are directly quoted from a source.